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:icongodziu:
i like repeating elements on photos, so i like this one :)
:iconimrenedim:
First of all nice work. The lines are good the light also.
The B&W density could be depper but it's nice ( difficult in digital easyer in dark room )
But only one small problem, The arm of the cop.... too present ( I know I always seek the details.)
Never the less good work.
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:icony-me:
Awsome, Thank you! :D

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Thanks again for the critique. :D

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:iconpanopticum:
I agree to whats been said before. I like
the domino-effect and the repetition. The
b/w could be a bit deeper using levels and
arm of the cop and the head of the guy are
a bit "too much".

Anyway, i like it too.

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:icony-me:
Thanks for the critique. :)

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:iconldo:
I like the repetition. The B&W works well!

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:icony-me:
Thanks a lot! Just too bad there werent more motorcycles in the line... :(

Thanks again for the comment :)

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:iconmssv:
i love the contrast and the light you've captured, I think it would have been cool if you'd tilted the camera on the same angle as the bikes when you took the photo... might have added an extra bit of interest to the shot. Other than that i cant think of anything else to improve whats already a great shot :) nice work

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May 5, 2005
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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
KODAK DX6490 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
1/91 second
F/4.5
40 mm
Jan 1, 2003, 1:55:40 PM

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